User talk:ThinkBlue/Sandbox3
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[edit]- The plot section skips from Will's apartment to the wedding reception. Isn't there anything to mention about the wedding itself?
- No, a wedding reception, like a party. Its not an actual wedding, they just throw a reception. See here.
- So there's no ceremony? Theleftorium 23:12, 14 August 2009 (UTC)
- Nope, no wedding ceremony. They married in the park, where the tent was.
- So there's no ceremony? Theleftorium 23:12, 14 August 2009 (UTC)
- No, a wedding reception, like a party. Its not an actual wedding, they just throw a reception. See here.
- "Let me put it this way, at some point down the road, something is going to have to intervene." Not really sure what this quote means. Can you clarify?
- I just added it, cause it was reiteration to the report. But, I removed it.
- Jhoni Marchinko, Greenstein's producing partner, commented: "We will never jump the shark on Will & Grace." This seems a bit out of place. Can you move it around and better explain what he means?
- Removed.
- "added a beaded Sergio Rossi boots" Is it just me or does this read weird?
- I think I got it.
- In the lead you say "The episode also garnered Will & Grace's second-largest audience ever among adults aged 18 to 49," but this isn't mentioned in the reception section.
- Has been added.
Theleftorium 22:19, 14 August 2009 (UTC)
Comments, part deux
[edit]- Before Gavin leaves, Will gives him a piece of advice. – What is the advice?