User talk:Thee.p

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Proposed deletion of Carbon Snake

Hello, Thee.p. I wanted to let you know that I’m proposing an article that you started, Carbon Snake, for deletion because I don't think it meets our criteria for inclusion. If you don't want the article deleted:

edit the page
remove the text that looks like this: {{proposed deletion/dated...}}
save the page

Also, be sure to explain why you think the article should be kept in your edit summary or on the article's talk page. If you don't do so, it may be deleted later anyway.

You can leave a note on my talk page if you have questions.

Mduvekot (talk) 14:47, 17 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Carbon snake

Hi Thee.p! Thank you for your contribution to the article.

Please format your references properly using the template {{cite}}. Do not forget that we have online links to other sources too. You can add them to the last section "external links".
Please add photos/VDOs.
Please follow WP:MOS when you revise the article. The article should be made into sections. Please see examples from other chemical demonstration articles in Category:Chemistry_classroom_experiments. --Taweetham (talk) 10:36, 18 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I have looked at formatting guidelines already and I have done importing photo and video into the article. Also, I did some editing on the reference list as well as the sectioning. Thank you for your help. --Thee.p (talk) 15:58, 24 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Thee.p! I see a lot of improvement to the article. However, references are still not properly formatted. Please have a look into {{Cite book}}. Also, please make sure that you do not miss any references. I remember there were three books. --Taweetham (talk) 04:32, 26 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Thee.p! Thank you for your contribution to the article Carbon snake. So far I don't see any issue with the article, though more contributions are welcome. --Athikhun.suw (talk) 03:19, 4 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Thee.p! Please improve internal links to/from your article. For example, the words, sucrose, carbon dioxide and water in the article does not have an internal link to an appropriate article yet. --Taweetham (talk) 02:14, 5 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I have already added internal links in my article. Thee.p (talk) 08:47, 15 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]