User talk:Tdaetaunm
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Hi, Tatum! Thank you for peer reviewing my article. I know I didn't have a lot but you really helped me come up with more ideas on how to make my article neutral. I made sure in my article to cover both sides. I admit, the possibilities of it scares me too a little bit. With all these jobs covered by artificial intelligence, where does that leave us? Thanks again for taking the time to give me a thoughtful peer review. Haileywriter (talk) 23:52, 17 April 2019 (UTC)
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[edit]Hello, Tdaetaunm, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:41, 12 February 2019 (UTC)
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[edit]You've added a lot of content to sustainable design, nice work! Here are some suggestions to make sure you get a good grade:
- You're still a bit light on content, are there any other topics you could cover? Maybe more on example features or projects?
- Your section on "future of" might be better called something like "promotion of" or "governance of" ...maybe there's more you can talk about here as well?
- One more pass at linking to other wikipedia pages is needed, e.g. for Non-renewable resource
- Check for spelling and grammar