User talk:TaoCo/sandbox
Peer Reviews
[edit]Hello! I have made some small spelling/grammar edits to your draft. Your tone is good; quite neutral.
Here are some additional suggestions I have for you:
- "located a few hundred kilometers away from..." Specify the number, if possible.
- With geographical coordinates, try to give some indication of longitudinal location.
- Your Lead (Intro) Paragraph seems to be more about the Galapagos Triple Junction than about the Galapagos Microplate itself.
If you think all of the information on the GTJ is necessary for this article, construct a later section specifically about the junction's impacts, and mention the GTJ and explain only what "the GMP is bounded by" in the Lead. If you decide that some of this information is unnecessary, add a link to the GTJ Wikipedia page when you mention it in the Lead.
- Add links to other Wikipedia articles within your text. For example, with "South America", "Galapagos Triple Junction", "Pacific Plate", etc.
- I cannot review your references, because they are not present. However, (IMPORTANT!) remember to add citations within the text of your draft.
This helps a reader see where you got key information, and possibly verify it.
- Add an image of the Galapagos MP, to provide a visual aid of the region being discussed.
- Reread your draft when it is complete! Some of the phrasing can be adjusted for a smoother flow.
- And, of course, complete your draft. :)
I hope you find this review helpful. Happy editing! Surbhi ghadia (talk) 23:48, 26 May 2017 (UTC)