User talk:TaoCo/GalapagosMicroplateSandbox
Peer Review
[edit]Peer Review 1
- The organization of your article is pretty good, however I think the intro is a bit large as some of it is redundant as it covers what the Galapagos triple junction is while also linking the article. For example your line:
"The Galapagos triple junction is not an ordinary Ridge-Ridge-Ridge(RRR) triple junction in consideration that the westward propagating and slowly diverging Cocos-Nazca Ridge cuts through toward the East Pacific Rise and opens up a second microplate in a smaller scale at north of the GMP." could be cut down to: "The Cocos-Nazca Ridge cuts through toward the East Pacific Rise and opens up a second, smaller microplate to the north of the GMP"
- Use {{reflist (close brackets) under your references so they automatically link to each article.
- Don't forget to add images, and if you want you can add an {{Infobox (close brackets) to match the other plate pages
- "...evidence supported from the southern triple junction trace on the Pacific plate that developed southern boundary of the Galapagos Microplate" seems like a fragmented sentence and I am not sure what you meant here.
- "tend to migrated southward" doesn't quite sound correct
- Your Geological Evolution section could use more hyperlinks, but seems good except for the part on the East pacific rise as you should be more explicit on how it affect the plate or leave it out.
- "is detected cutting through" (remove detected or rephrase) ,"...magmatism (a)long the wedge"