User talk:Talkabtthings
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[edit]Good day. Thank you for your response regarding my review. In light of your comments, I will review the article again and reconsider my position and/or provide more specific comments aimed at developing the article further. Unfortunately, I am just off to my day job now, so I will contact you again within the next two days. Best Regards Snowysusan 09:48, 9 August 2012 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Snowysusan (talk • contribs)
Good day. I have looked at your submission again and done some of my own research online as well. I have also reviewed again the Wikipedia Guidelines for Notable Corporation. Although, I'm still of the view that the company does not meet these guideline, I have removed my indication that the article was declined so that you can resubmit it and another reviewer can look at it without being influenced at all by my view. It may be that another reviewer will come to a different conclusion. All the best. Snowysusan 08:53, 11 August 2012 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Snowysusan (talk • contribs)
Your submission at Articles for creation
[edit]- If you would like to continue working on the submission, you can find it at Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/DRONA Mobile.
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- Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! :- ) Don 00:40, 26 August 2012 (UTC)
Hi Don. I have revised the Wiki and tried to make it look less like an advertisement. Please have a look. I would appreciate any advice on how to make the article better. Thank you.
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- Talkabtthings,
- I'm sorry. I'm not ignoring you. I just have been so very busy lately and keep forgetting to get back to you. It looks better. I touched a few words, you can check the history, and added a table for the awards. If you don't like, you can remove it. Let's let another reviewer have a look at it. Good luck. -- :- ) Don 03:59, 6 September 2012 (UTC)
- Dcshank
- Thanks for your contribution, Don. For another reviewers, do I need to resubmit the article for review (the review template is still showing at the bottom of the article) or remove the section above which says the article has been declined for submission?
- I think everything is fine. I am working on removing some promotional stuff. I am going to check another reference or 2 and I think I can approve. -- :- ) Don 16:03, 6 September 2012 (UTC)
- This article only mentions Delta Technologies if that is same, it is not mention on your page. -- :- ) Don 16:10, 6 September 2012 (UTC)
- I think everything is fine. I am working on removing some promotional stuff. I am going to check another reference or 2 and I think I can approve. -- :- ) Don 16:03, 6 September 2012 (UTC)
Your submission at Articles for creation
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The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.
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:- ) Don 16:30, 6 September 2012 (UTC)