User talk:T laq202/sandbox
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[edit]- explain how the class of 1913 were called pirates in the introduction
- Can we have a better connection between group 2 and group 3's parts?
- Skim through and weed out repeat information
- In-line Citations where necessary
- References according to Layout Style Guide
- Reformat to follow Manual of Style
- why is the letter from the aaup president pasted in there?- also if it needs to be included can we format it better? Separate the quote?
- Better format background section for consistency
- Get rid of all bullet pointed material/notes
- Does the letter from the aaup president have paragraphs or is it one solid block?
- Communicate between the background and events groups to ensure that no information is repeated or left out
- For group 3 start with your second section since it mentions Mecklin and flows better with Group 2's part, rather than starting with aaup president letter