User talk:TRacer202/sandbox

You have a ton of citations that look very reputable which is great! Your addition to the article is important and the information you have is relevant. I like the use of examples to clarify your meaning. The phrasing of the 2nd sentence is a little hard to comprehend on a first read through. (Which may be due to the fact that I'm rather tired, so if so ignore this). Maybe instead of the "with it being seen" you could do a "it being commonly seen" and then continue with the public events bits. I didn't know that, it sounds quite liberating. Possibly an example with how it unifies nations. Vanderson2415 (talk) 06:27, 15 October 2016 (UTC)