User talk:TROLLSworldtour/Flowers of sulfur

Peer Review

Hi Authors,

I have completed your review and can now be accessed. Great work so far! The article could benefit from a few more sources and images. Consider also having a section discussing chemical and physical properties. Elbert Ainsteinium (talk) 22:15, 30 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello,

Great job contributing to this article! The only thing that I would suggest adding is a topic about the history of sulphur flowers. You could potentially explain how sulphur flowers were discovered and who was behind the discovery, also some images would be great to show what sulphur flowers look like.Ishachahal (talk) 01:37, 31 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, This article looks great, my main suggestion is to add more images, make sure the formatting is consistent (some sections in italics), and make sure that all of your information is cited! I think it's ok for there to be a fair number of citations. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sganz3 (talk • contribs) 04:19, 1 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]