User talk:Sydseter
The predicate,"parkt", is third person singular in present tense, and not in Imperfekt. [1]
- "Die Person, wegen der ich hier bin" (The person I am here because of, or The person for which reason I am here.)
"The person I am here because of", is a dependent sentence. "because of" what? I don't get it. The sentence is ambiguous, and can be interpreted in two ways. Either, you are at a particular party because of a particular person, or you are alive thanks to this person. It might be better to say, "I am here because of this person," since it's not a dependent clause, or You can use a clause like, "for which reason", but it might be a even better solution.
"Damals;" can have several different meanings. I don't feel the word, "that," gives the sentence any meaning. I think a less ambiguous clause will make it easier to understand the translation.[2]
Edits to German sentence structure
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One more thing: it would be more useful to move your two comments above to the talk page of German sentence structure. CapnPrep (talk) 19:56, 22 October 2008 (UTC)