User talk:Swingline400
Swingline400
The Nuclear Regulatory Commission reported that contaminated clothing and maintenance equipment had been left outside a TXU Energy plant 11 times from January 24, 2000, to May 24, 2001. When the TXU Energy plant owner was asked about it, he said these incidents never posed any risk to the employees or to the public. (1) Other than this, TXU has a good record and is working with activists to help keep the environment clean.
1.Query.nytimes.com: National Briefing, Southwest: Texas: Citation Against Power Plant: January 24, 2002
I moved that to User:Swingline400/sandbox as I'm not really sure what it was about but it looked like you were working on it. CambridgeBayWeather (Talk) 08:51, 19 October 2007 (UTC)
Your Task Force Edits
[edit]Check your comma use in Kim Possible article. The colon change in the Owens Valley article should be reverted. Mcwabaunsee 02:56, 16 November 2007 (UTC)
Good work on your environmental section for Marathon Oil. Remember you don't need to sign your contributions within the article, only sign your contributions to the discussion pages. This section's sources and their formatting need further attention. Mcwabaunsee 02:56, 16 November 2007 (UTC)
REMEMBER the necessary sections the task force mean to emphasize. Your Atwood Oceanics article is informative, but needs organization editing. What about the environmental impacts that Atwood has? Do they have any significant financial associations? Mcwabaunsee 02:56, 16 November 2007 (UTC)
Some good work on Reliant Energy, but it needs some balancing. What's this reference trouble? Look at the reference formatting of other sections that are correct and modify yours accordingly. Mcwabaunsee 02:56, 16 November 2007 (UTC)
Your environmental section for the Hess Corporation, though it deals with an oil spill, seems to congratulate the company's willingness to clean up the spill in place of discussing their environmental record, on which a large oil spill (howsoever it's cleaned up) seems a considerable problem. Mcwabaunsee 02:56, 16 November 2007 (UTC)
What about Valco's record as opposed to their objectives? Mcwabaunsee 02:56, 16 November 2007 (UTC)