User talk:Swiftanneliese
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[edit]Hello, Swiftanneliese, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:31, 18 September 2018 (UTC)
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[edit]The contributions made added accuracy and more important information to the article. The author could have added more information to the article. Contributions about the interior of the building and more information about the actual architecture and style of the building could add more depth to the current article. Sources used for these contributions could have been more scholarly. While the information given seems to be accurate sources such as "World's Hottest Parties" by Forbes might not have been the best scholarly source to ensure accurate information. An edit was made to show 43 suites in the hotel when it was originally 46 which has since been edited back to 46 since that is the number of suites. When looking elsewhere to discover which was accurate I saw websites saying anywhere from 36-52 so I am not sure which number was accurate, it would be helpful to find a source that knew for sure how many suites the hotel has. I think your contribution of the number of influential visitors to the hotel was a key point the article was previously missing. Adding information about the recent renovations and the details of them made the article more up to date and was a good missing point from the current article. Overall, the edits made to the article had a substantial impact on making this article up to date and more informative. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tessatrouchon (talk • contribs) 22:03, 10 December 2018 (UTC)