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Hi John,

Looking good! I have a couple of points I wanted to mention.

  • Word count is low - only 765. Were you going to include a picture? Even if you do have a picture, you need to have at least 800 words.
  • A good variety of outside sources.
  • Writing is very good, and shows good neutrality.

-Ms. Becvar
Kairyth (talk) 16:50, 7 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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