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August 2023

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Information icon Please refrain from making unconstructive edits to Wikipedia. Your edits appear to be disruptive and have been or will be reverted.

Please ensure you are familiar with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines, and please do not continue to make edits that appear disruptive. Continued disruptive editing may result in loss of editing privileges. I've reverted quite a few of your edits as they were incorrect Knitsey (talk) 01:50, 13 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Fuzion Growth

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I have moved that to Draft:Fuzion Growth. It is very promotional and at first I thought it had been copied from the companies website. It has no independent reliable sources. In fact the only sources are to the companies web site which are all dead. The only link that works is the Linkedin one. You need to find articles other than the company site to prove that they are notable. In addition you need to make it look like it wasn't written by an advertising agency.

By the way were you paid to create this entry? CambridgeBayWeather (solidly non-human), Uqaqtuq (talk), Huliva 16:35, 17 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

No I have not been paid. I will edit it to make it less promotional and add more independent sources. Thanks, Strat4324 (talk) 17:02, 17 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Could you tell me more about why it seems like an advert. Not sure which part is advertising. Strat4324 (talk) 17:03, 17 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I have updated the page with more sources. Please let me know if more changes are needed. Strat4324 (talk) 17:30, 17 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Things like "The agency's commitment to delivering results, their unparalleled understanding of the healthcare ecosystem, and their dedication to harnessing technology for transformative growth, all played a pivotal role in their expansion. Building upon their achievements in the dental field, Fuzion's expertise naturally extended to other medical specialties, further solidifying their position as an industry leader." are just pure promotional material. It's not neutral and is unsourced and most of the article is like that. CambridgeBayWeather (solidly non-human), Uqaqtuq (talk), Huliva 17:51, 17 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Understood. Sorry, that was not my intention. I’ll make the necessary changes. Strat4324 (talk) 18:03, 17 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, please see the updated page. Strat4324 (talk) 18:12, 17 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Note: I have moved the draft to an article as the bot is removing the non free image that I had included in the article as it has since been demoted to a draft. Feel free to draft it again and let me know if further edits are needed. Hopefully all is fixed though. Thanks! Strat4324 (talk) 04:58, 18 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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A tag has been placed on Fuzion Growth, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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August 2023

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