User talk:Stephanie.lewis58/sandbox

Hey Stephanie

You are missing your leads section were you state what city you did your wiki on and what topics you decided to talk about, you should also state why you think the information you added and topics you chose are good to add to the original wikipedia page. I feel as though your education section is kind of all over the place you should add sub headers or bullet points to list different types of schools Roxbury has such as; public schools, private schools, primary and secondary schools, universities. Also what they offer this will make your structure more clear. You also have some words that are misspelled which makes your structure a bit unclear.

Your transportation section looks incomplete, in addition to the train lines and bus lines you listed you should also add other transportation resources people use to get around such as; taxis, Ferris, subways, private transportation, etc. You can also throw in some statistics on how many people actually use public transportation as opposed to having there own transportation.

In your Community Resource section you have some great information, and you list the community organizations that are in Roxbury. However, you should also briefly explain what kind of program each organization offers people such as; mentoring, tutoring, homework assistance, sports, arts and media, job opportunities, etc.

In your Housing section you state that there are various housing organizations and shelters, what are the names of these shelters? and do how many are low-income housing? are any "equal" housing like in that video we watched in the beginning of the semester? maybe you can add some stats on housing.

I clicked on one of your references ( "Hattie B. Community Center History". Cooper. Retrieved 5 March 2016.) and it lead me to an amazon page on a screwdriver to repair mac books, but other than that all of your references worked and they seem reliable. One thing that i would recommend is to put actual links in your sections so it can be more clear on what reference goes with what information.

Shakiraurena (talk) 22:46, 10 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Stephanie, You need to make sure you have citations through your sections. I don't see them. Also make sure to expand on the Transportation section. Use the libguide, handouts, and example of Brooklyn wiki to have you tighten up your sections. Dr. Chenault Tiffygc1 (talk) 19:46, 15 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]