User talk:Stanthewu/sandbox

Peer Comments Hello Stanthewu. It is chickfilkay. I am here to leave peer comments on this article for Wikipedia.org. My first immediate realization is that the citations aren't listed as citations. There's a reference list, but wikipedia pages generally have the citation in a bulleted list and you can just copy and paste the journal entry by adding it using the visual editor. See the Wikipedia lessons directory about how to do this in general.

Added bold and citation where appropriate as I saw (though I certainly may have missed a few) and reduced capitalization where it was not necessary.

It looks like you use citations from research studies to say measurements, I'd just make sure that those are accepted as true and that they aren't just speculated (also citing the journal).

Adding redirects to other wikipedia pages when I saw a new word (though again I likely missed a lot).

Head to leave early, plan to add additional comments at a later date since I was unable to evaluate the actual content as of yet. Chickfilkay (talk) 01:54, 1 October 2019 (UTC)