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I've only just noticed the {{editorial}} tag you've put on the article. Could you explain how it seems to read like an opinion piece? It seems fine to me.--Launchballer 07:27, 22 October 2013 (UTC)
- There has been a recent change to the article since I tagged it that completely changes the tone of the paragraph I originally had issue with, and I don't think the need for the tag is now as strong as it was. I was originally concerned with some of the words used that suggested a personal opinion towards the companies mentioned and the specific policies brought up in the article itself, but I'm happy that the whole tone of the article has improved. I have removed the tag and also changed the use of the word "rumbled" to "exposed" within the article itself. Splink (talk) 12:52, 22 October 2013 (UTC)