User talk:SooBin Moon

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Re:Hello, professor

Good job but to finish the assignment please WP:SIGN your post on my talk page. --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 12:33, 28 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

re: Question-SooBin Moon

Agriculture in South Korea is a good topic. You can expand it for our project. Please add it to our class dashboard. --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 08:22, 27 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Regarding [1] it is a good start but you need to fix this. First, your reference has been added in the middle of another word, and a section heading that that. It is not a correct place for it. A reference should be added to the end of a regular sentence that it serves to verify. Please fix your edit. Thanks you, --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 10:25, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Social Development Feedback

Hello, I’m Smarduch Klara, an exchange student taking Social Development class. I read your article about Agriculture in South Korea. I found this topic really interesting since, as you presented in the draft, South Korea is a mountainous country so the space for agriculture is limited. I would suggest putting there more sub-headings and structuring more your article. It will be easier to go through the text and find certain information. You mentioned there that rice is a grain that Korea mostly produces, are there any other goods produced by South Korea? I'm looking forward to you expending that article. I'm also looking forward to getting to know more about this topic. Good luck! KlaraSma (talk) 12:44, 24 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback

Hi Soobin. I'm Kim Ami, taking a social development class. I enjoyed your article on the subject of agriculture in Korea. However, I think it is better to make the title of the paragraph distinct from the content of the paragraph. So it would be good to use the "Paragraph" function in the Wikipedia visual editor. I think it will be much better to see when the article is completed! Ami Kim (talk) 3:54, 5 June 2020 (UTC)

Feedback on your project for Social Development class

I have reviewed the content you added to [2]. The good news is, it is on topic and in good English, but unfortunately it has a number of other problems, which is why it was temporarily removed from the article. You can restore it, but you will need to fix the following issues: 1) the content should be integrated into the article, not just pasted on top of the existing content 2) it needs to be referenced; each paragraph should clearly cite its source (see our video on How to Add References, etc.) 3) it needs to be formatted with hyperlinks and headings 4) the article needs a WP:LEAD (abstract) on the top. Please try again and let me know when your version 2 is ready. --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 07:59, 5 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Good job

With your translations into Korean!

--_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 09:44, 23 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]