User talk:Sonam jindal/Sonam jindal/sandbox
Peer Review I'm surprised an article on the history of medical education didn't already exist!
-Since you are starting a completely new article, it would benefit from an introduction section that outlines the main points of the articles, including suggestions for future additions.
-There are two periods around the third citation
-You can probably link William Harvey's article
-You talk about a lot of "various" systems and issues of unification in the second paragraph, I'm interested to learn about them specifically
-Delete "as" in the fourth sentence of the third paragraph
You have the challenge of starting from scratch. It's a great comprehensive look but it can use some more specifics for the Renaissance period of medical education.
David Zhao
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