User talk:Smandlso/sandbox
Hey team,
This looks really good so far. I love the addition of photos, and the organization and info all looks good. The only pointers I have are:
- Add a little more info in the summary at the top of the article
- Fix citation 32 - it's a bad URL right now.
- See if you can find any external (i.e., non-Northwestern) citations to add. Because the info here is informational rather than interpretation, I think the NU sources are OK, but it might be nice if you could find something external talking about, for example, the number of film/theater professionals who have come from NU.
At this point, I think you could also ask Ian, our content expert, for feedback. For example, I like the lists of majors and lists of influential graduates, but maybe he would have some suggestions about a better way to organize them.
Great work so far! -- Jdfoote (talk) 14:52, 24 October 2016 (UTC)