User talk:Smallfrycode/Kamen (volcano)

Topography

A great idea was recently brought up by a peer-review about going more into depth on Kamen's topography. I believe that this would be beneficial to the article, so I plan to start working on that section (which will be under the history section) next. Smallfrycode (talk) 14:01, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

TA Comments

Add more new information, such as:

What is the tectonic setting of the volcano, and how does this relate to its structure?

Can you compare it to nearby volcanoes and say what kind of recent activity they have had?

Noting that the composition of the erupted lava changed over time is good; do any sources give an explanation of why? What was the composition of the new lava?

Your information seems good, but the way it is stated is a bit unclear. I would recommend doing some rephrasing. (For example: What are Griva and Studyonyi? How exactly are dikes involved in the eruption? Dikes form underground, and are not caused by lava flows on the surface. The "Topography" section restates some information that is already introduced.) UnlockedLibrary (talk) 00:01, 22 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]