User talk:Slugger O'Toole/sandbox

Sup. I think you have a mistake here "family notably primarily". Either a comma or word arrangement. BlueworldSpeccie (talk) 19:27, 10 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Another thing here, "She also praised Russell, saying" with the mom talking about his wife but she isn't mentioned at all till the next section. So perhaps "She also praised his wife, Russell, saying "BlueworldSpeccie (talk) 19:34, 10 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]