User talk:Slegg101
Mussel Review
[edit]I especially like that you cleaned up and clarified several arts of the article. I agree that you could reword the first sentence, In the United States and Canada, which are home to the most diverse freshwater.... Overall, the paragraph could use a little more substance. Since it is about conservation, what types of conservation efforts are underway for mussels. I agree with the reviewer that you inclusion of how many species are endangered was well done.Marciaharrison (talk) 14:59, 20 February 2017 (UTC)
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Mussel review
[edit]First off you give some good details, citations, and remained neutral. The first sentence reads a little weird to me so you might want to reword it a little. Maybe add something about what is being done about so many species being endangered. All in all I liked your addition. Boyles24 (talk) 19:40, 17 February 2017 (UTC)
Your draft article, Draft:Bill Legg
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