User talk:Skrainov
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[edit]Hello, Skrainov, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:41, 23 August 2018 (UTC)
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[edit]Hi! A lot of my notes mirror what your professor left on your talk page, so I just want to emphasize what he wrote. You need to avoid colloquialisms, as not every reader will be aware of the term - there are a lot of ESL readers, for example. The idea also looks very similar to civic engagement/participation, so you should look at seeing if you can expand that or find ways to show how the term differs. Also watch your sourcing, as one of the links you added came up only as " "Kent State University -- CAS – Central Authentication Service". ebookcentral.proquest.com" and didn't show what the source was or any other citation information. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:44, 12 October 2018 (UTC)
Ways to improve Political Obligation
[edit]Hello, Skrainov,
Thanks for creating Political Obligation! I edit here too, under the username Rosguill and it's nice to meet you :-)
I wanted to let you know that I have tagged the page as having some issues to fix, as a part of our page curation process and note that:-
The article needs some minor copyediting to comply with the manual of style. Additionally, citations are needed for several claims in the "Divinity and Morality" and "Locke, Hobbes, and the Social Contrac" sections.
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signed, Rosguill talk 02:45, 2 January 2019 (UTC)