User talk:Skhawk98/sandbox

This is really excellent. You need to fix the intro (you don't really have one), but the rest is well sourced and well written. SarahEMC2 (talk) 12:30, 16 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Some comments

Wow Skhawk98, this is a great draft! Normally I don't need to make this comment, but one thing you might check out is WP:Overlinking. You've got wikilinks to the important people, concepts and organizations and that's awesome. It really helps build the web of articles out there. However, usually you only need to link an article once in an article of this length. If something is linked twice it isn't a bit deal but Alice Paul is linked ~5 times. What you can do is keep the first wikilink in the article and remove the remainder. Once you do that if you feel you have to add in more to the same article, do so! But I think you'll find one or two links is the best balance of convenience and information overload. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:50, 17 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]