User talk:Sirryan2002

I have just seen your request for assessment- or probably any feedback for a Michigan school and can feel your pain! It is one of the laws of Wikipedia, that if you are writing well- everyone else just leaves you to it! Schools articles vary across the world- I don't attempt to do US schools because they are a mystery to me their focus is different. I am careful about editing UK private schools as I need to be careful about NPOV and balance. I rarely edit schools where I have been a governor, or worked, or sent my children because of WP:COI. So having declared my limitations- I am really impressed at the amount of effort you have put in. Now the purpose of feedback is multifold. Firstly it give you a contact point where you can whinge, ask for advice. Secondly it should give you a list of tasks- and positive comments, it give you a second set of eyes and an anchor point. and finally maybe a grade. The article is still a C as are most school articles - most remain stubs, but the ones that have received any attention only make it to C. This article is very US centric and says things like 'it follows a standard curriculum'. Whats that. Is it set by the state the school district, the police department. Is the language of tuition Spanish, English a Native American language. Take several steps back and research other curriculums and then do a comparison. You talk about the school- was it built to national or state guidelines- what is the size of a standard classroom in Michigan. WP is always looking for independent references- that is independent of the school. The state architects dept must have published the specs and tender documents on line- those give a lot of details. What is the school budget- I don't understand the Bond system- a whole section there! I looked at the School Web Site- they have a lot to learn. Taking a school at random Pimlico Academy is a C, but their website is so much more developed Pimlico Academy- and the kids, parents and teachers made the international press. I was so pleased that I got the photos up as the story was breaking. However it is not a B, as it is missing some of the statistics that you have managed to include. You will see how I did a screen grab of the school logo, and uploaded it using the upload wizard. Taking photos around the school can be tricky- from the WP point of view- no images of children or recognisable images of staff, ferom the view of personal safety- discuss your intention with a member of staff and ask them to accompany you when you are using the camera- the fact you asked will cover you normally. If they want to know more they can send me an email. ClemRutter (talk) 19:31, 4 June 2021 (UTC)