User talk:SirLladnar
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[edit]Hello, SirLladnar, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:09, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
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[edit]Hey! I think the way the article is structured is very organized and easy to follow. Each section is well developed with Water Quality being the longest. I think that is good because this article specifically deals with water supply and sanitation. Water access could probably be expanded on as I am sure that the Mekong River is not the only water source, though I do think including it is important. There are a lot of statistics that are really helpful and are a good source of factual evidence. The high number of useful and reliable references makes this article more trustworthy as well. There is a good use of media and I think you could add more, specifically in Water Quality. The article is primarily neutral without any sentence leaning towards any personal biases. I think this wiki article was edited nicely and definitely helps me get a good idea of how I should structure the wiki article I am currently editing. - Pauline