User talk:SimoneDaniele

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Hello, SimoneDaniele, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Unfortunately, one or more of the pages you created, such as Luisa Via Roma, may not conform to some of Wikipedia's guidelines, and may soon be deleted.

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Speedy deletion nomination of Luisa Via Roma

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A tag has been placed on Luisa Via Roma, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, product, group, service or person and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become an encyclopedia article. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Business for more information.

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Deletion

Hi, Simone. I deleted your recent article because it did not provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts or show that it meets the notability guidelines. It was also was written in a promotional tone, Please see this information. I've copied a message from Crusio from my talk page below. Jimfbleak - talk to me? 06:00, 23 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I rarely answer emails about this kind of stuff. If you want to communicate with me about this, the correct place to do that is my talk page. The article #Net-a-porter" to which you kindly pointed me has since been deleted as spam, too. To create an article about your company, you'll have to show that it is "notable" in the Wikipedia sense and write it in a [[WP:NPOV|neutral]) manner (so "Foo is a company selling clothes" is fine, but "Foo is the premier company selling wonderful clothing" is not, unless you can find an [[WP:RS|independent reliable source]) that says this). Nevertheless, please also be aware of WP's conflict of interest policy. Hope this helps. --Crusio (talk) 12:19, 22 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Jimfbleak thank you very much for your answer. I changed the article now and published it as http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SimoneDaniele/Luisa_Via_Roma could you please take a look and tellme what I should still change. Thanks a lot. SimoneDaniele

Hi Jimfbleak I changed the article now according to the suggestions you gave me and it is still published as http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SimoneDaniele/Luisa_Via_Roma could you please take a look and tell me if I should still change anything. Thanks a lot. SimoneDaniele

Comments

There is still so much wrong with it. Although you have added references, they are hard to read, and not linked to what they are supporting. Write your refs like this <ref>[url description] </ref> and put them immediately after the text they are supporting. Put {{reflist}} under the "References" heading at the end, and the refs will be displayed. See Vinita Gupta as an example from today's front page of how it should look.

It's still very spammy in tone, some examples include constantly innovative hunter of fashion talents, recognized as a reference point for devotees of luxury and fashion., invites you to the restaurant where clients can enjoy varieties from the Italian cuisine Launch of the 3D Store, a shopping experience where the virtual becomes more real. — many more. You have written an advertisement, not an encyclopaedia article. Fully capitalising the website is also spammy

Use wikilinks eg Pierre Balmain, Burberry, Stella McCartney, Alexander McQueen Yves Saint Laurent

Your "External links" is enough to get the article deleted on sight, just multiple links to the company's web pages. One link to the official site please. If people want more info about purchasing, they can find it themselves from there.

Speedy deletion nomination of Luisa Via Roma

If this is the first article that you have created, you may want to read the guide to writing your first article.
You may want to consider using the Article Wizard to help you create articles.

A tag has been placed on Luisa Via Roma, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, product, group, service or person and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become an encyclopedia article. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Business for more information.

If you think that this notice was placed here in error, contest the deletion by clicking on the button labelled "Click here to contest this speedy deletion". Doing so will take you to the talk page where you will find a pre-formatted place for you to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. You can also visit the the page's talk page directly to give your reasons, but be aware that once tagged for speedy deletion, if the page meets the criterion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag yourself, but don't hesitate to add information to the page that would render it more in conformance with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, you can contact one of these administrators to request that the administrator userfy the page or email a copy to you. Crusio (talk) 11:26, 10 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]