User talk:Simone.cook
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[edit]Hello, Simone.cook, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 03:10, 7 September 2016 (UTC)
Peer Review Overall, this is a very balanced as well as neutral article. I think that your article would benefit from having more information about this topic, and if it were more detailed and was divided into subsections instead of one big paragraph about different things. This article also needs a better lead to give the reader a better understanding on what this article is about. If one more source was added so improve the content of this article and make it much more detailed with subsections, it would be even stronger. ValerieGudino (talk) 04:55, 15 October 2016 (UTC)
Response: I will definitely separate my information into different paragraphs to make my argument more clear as well as adding more sources to improve the notability of my argument. Simone.cook (talk) 02:37, 21 October 2016 (UTC)
Possible articles to edit
[edit]Mockumentary- https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mockumentary -> This page gives a list of all different types of rockumentary in Pop culture but doesn't mention certain movies or TV shows from this genre. So i would add a list of two or three and explain about them.
historiography of world war two- https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Historiography_of_World_War_II -> add more to the introduction about the different historical perspectives on the cause of world war one.(orthodox, revisionist, post revisionist.) Essentially, a brief introduction. Also, the article says that it needs more sources, so include paragraphs about other historians perspectives that differ from the one historian they talk about (AJP taylor)
Collaboration during world war two- Here I would add sources and spice up some arguments in the introduction. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Collaborationism#World_War_II