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For the article critique, I picked "Hacktivism." https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hacktivism Simmi106 (talk) 14:13, 23 February 2017 (UTC)
Week 3
[edit]Hacktivism https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hacktivism
Strengths:
- Remained neutral throughout (no biased opinions)
- All information is relevant
- Informative, not persuasive
Weaknesses:
- Lack of citations
- Needs a few updated sources — Preceding unsigned comment added by Simmi106 (talk • contribs) 02:33, 28 February 2017 (UTC)
My added sentences: In 1996, the title of the United States Department of Justice's homepage was changed to "Department of Injustice". Pornographic images were also added to the homepage to protest the Communications Decency Act. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Simmi106 (talk • contribs) 02:46, 28 February 2017 (UTC)