User talk:Shrudolph

This user is a student editor in Northeastern_University/ENGW3307_33035_Advanced_Writing_for_the_Sciences_(Spring_2018) .

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:57, 16 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

(Peer Review, Yikai Kuo)

- Function section is very descriptive and may benefit from a pathway diagram
- In the first sentence of Clinical Significance, could elaborate on "increased complement activity". Wording is slightly confusing because in the next sentence you state that low CFI levels leads to low levels of other proteins
but in the first sentence there was increased complement activity
- Good references
- Could skip to subheadings in Clinical Significance without the lead in section, might flow better — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kuo.e (talk • contribs) 20:57, 30 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]