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Your submission at Articles for creation: Israel's Lookout (November 19)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by David.moreno72 was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

No mention of subject in reference. Please read WP:REFB for how references are to be used.

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David.moreno72 01:19, 19 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Shmupo, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! David.moreno72 01:19, 19 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Israel's Lookout has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Israel's Lookout. Thanks! SeraphWiki (talk) 00:03, 12 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Israel's Lookout (January 16)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Lee Vilenski was:

Please fix photos before re-submitting.

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Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:03, 16 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Israel's Lookout (January 18)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Mortee was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The sources don't refer to "Israel's Lookout". The first three IRN articles listed here as mentioning it in the headline are actually "My Solidarity Visit to "the Settlements"", "The "Small Settlements" are Essential for Peace" and "Deputy FM bans Swedish officials from visiting Israel". The only news result I get on Google is one of this page's own images: https://www.google.co.uk/search?q="israel%27s+lookout"&tbm=nws.

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Mortee (talk) 03:04, 18 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Israel's Lookout (January 18)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by David.moreno72 was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

per previous comment. The reference titles don't match the actual headlines. If this is not corrected the draft must be deleted for violating Wikipedia's terms of use, 'posting content that is false or inaccurate'

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David.moreno72 23:59, 18 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your comments. "Israel's Lookout" is the official name of the site. Most references in english attempted to freely translate the name from Hebrew - hence there are different namings in the references. I double checked them and they all refer to similar namings such as: Israel's Balcony (or The Balcony of Israel), Israel's Porch, Arik's Porch or Porch of the Nation. There are many more citations in various sources however they are in the Hebrew language. Some of them are referenced in the Hebrew Wiki page of the site and I assumed linking them to the page in English would not be very helpful. Please see my discussion with Mortee on this issue: [[1]] Thanks

Your submission at Articles for creation: Israel's Lookout (January 19)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by David.moreno72 was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject—see the general guideline on notability, the golden rule and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and Help:Introduction to referencing/1), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Not one reference actually mentions, by name 'Israel's Lookout'. To pass WP:GNG, there needs to be in-depth coverage in reliable sources of the topic, which must include the articles title. False and misleading reference titles that were removed (the references also did not have any in-depth coverage anyway) as it violated Wikipedia's terms of use were actually reinstated despite warnings. Further resubmissions without addressing issues may be considered as WP:TENDENTIOUS

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David.moreno72 12:24, 19 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Israel's Lookout (January 28)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by David.moreno72 was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Newly added references still don't mention 'Israel's Lookout' verbatim. The photo of PM Netanyahu is a copyright violation and must be removed immediately. The reference titles don't match what is actually in the reference.

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David.moreno72 23:46, 28 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Israel's Lookout has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Israel's Lookout. Thanks! Legacypac (talk) 03:25, 20 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Israel's Lookout (December 14)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Legacypac was:

See previous comments. I strongly suggest including info on this area in the page about the area it is in

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Legacypac (talk) 08:39, 14 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Israel's Lookout (October 12)

Your recent article submission has been rejected. If you have further questions, you can ask at the Articles for creation help desk or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help. The reason left by UtherSRG was: This submission is contrary to the purpose of Wikipedia. The comment the reviewer left was: No changes since previous submission, where WP:TENDENTIOUS was called out. This is the end of the line.

UtherSRG (talk) 13:56, 12 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 11:05, 2 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]