User talk:Sheridantaylor17

This user is a student editor in University_of_South_Carolina/Invertebrate_Zoology_(Spring_2021) .

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:05, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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• Good starting outline but definitely needs more facts and information. • Lead only goes into the area that they are based. It should dive broadly into all of the topics. The importance of the topic is not included. • The sections are all in a suitable order except for maybe the taxonomy. I feel that it should be the first thing after the lead. Each section has around the same amount of bullet points to expand off of which is great. • The outline based the topic on clear cut facts and not a point of view. • I did not see any nonneutral phrases that have to be removed or any claims on behalf of unnamed groups. • Statements seem to be connected to mostly journals and other reliable articles related to topic. • Really comes down to being able to expand slight information presented now into a full fact-based article. • The most important thing that needs work as of now is the lead to tie the whole article together and to express importance. Seanadams79 (talk) 02:26, 14 March 2021 (UTC)seanadams79[reply]