User talk:Sheeba94/sandbox
Sheeba's peer review
[edit]Mehvish peer-reviewed Sheeba's article. The article contains a lot of information about the topic. The thing I like the most is how it specifies the states restriction's, penalties, and issued date for the laws with sources. The changes I'll suggest are that the paragraphs are needed to be small and only important information regarding the topic should be there. This will help the reader to not get bored while reading and help to focus on the topic.