User talk:SharpSeaHorse

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Your submission at Articles for creation: VDI Drones (February 28)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by CommanderWaterford was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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CommanderWaterford (talk) 10:12, 28 February 2021 (UTC)

Hello, SharpSeaHorse! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! CommanderWaterford (talk) 10:12, 28 February 2021 (UTC)

Thanks for the feedback. I've tried writing as neutral as possible. Not saying it's good or bad... What part of the text does endorsement? SharpSeaHorse (talk) 11:02, 28 February 2021 (UTC)

You do not have to have "endorsements" or be selling something to be promotional. 331dot (talk) 12:13, 28 February 2021 (UTC)

It's not promotional, it only states it exists in the most neutral way. SharpSeaHorse (talk) 11:02, 28 February 2021 (UTC)

Hello, I reviewed the content and it was clearly promotional. If one is used to writing corporate webpages or mission statements, things like that, it can be hard to unlearn. Also, as WIkipedia is an encyclopedia, subjects of encyclopedia article must meet inclusion criteria. "All content must be cited from reliable sources that are unconnected with the subject and have a reputation for fact checking."

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:VDI Drones

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A tag has been placed on Draft:VDI Drones, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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New message from 331dot

Hello, SharpSeaHorse. You have new messages at 331dot's talk page.
Message added 10:09, 1 March 2021 (UTC). You can remove this notice at any time by removing the {{Talkback}} or {{Tb}} template.

331dot (talk) 10:09, 1 March 2021 (UTC)