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Peer Review by Orna Lynch
- Expansion of a previously very limited article on EF-G (Elongation Factor G)
- Author expanded the introduction, and added sections differentiating the function of this particular protein, expanding into the uses of protein termination and elongation.
- The sections added are very comprehensive and distinct enough that they do not duplicate any other sections or repeat information
- The new information is organized in a very logical fashion, major improvement on the previous stub article
- Sources include a large variety of scientific databases with links to the direct page referencing EF-G
- Links to related articles relevant and helpful for understanding the concepts presented- even for those who may not have an extensive knowledge of protein function
- A possible improvement would be perhaps using numbered references throughout the article instead of names- could reduce the amount of content in each section and prevent the references from getting lost in the information
Lynch.or (talk) 16:12, 5 April 2018 (UTC) Orna Lynch