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Your submission at Articles for creation: Oasis Fertility (August 30)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KylieTastic was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject. Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Oasis Fertility and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Oasis Fertility, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
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KylieTastic (talk) 11:16, 30 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Shadysbook! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! KylieTastic (talk) 11:16, 30 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Shadysbook (talk) 10:35, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Added the necessary information wrt the company

Your submission at Articles for creation: Oasis Fertility (October 1)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Krishnavilasom Bhageerathan Pilla was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Oasis Fertility and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Oasis Fertility, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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Pillechan (പിള്ളേച്ചനോട് പറ) 21:02, 1 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Oasis Fertility (January 5)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Modussiccandi was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Oasis Fertility and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Oasis Fertility, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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Modussiccandi (talk) 20:09, 5 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Oasis Fertility (January 7)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by RPSkokie were:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Oasis Fertility and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Oasis Fertility, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

RPSkokie (talk) 14:18, 7 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Oasis Fertility (January 21)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by CNMall41 was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This still reads like a promotional piece for the company. I am also concerned with a possible WP:COI by submitter.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Oasis Fertility and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Oasis Fertility, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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CNMall41 (talk) 05:18, 21 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Trying to make the page live from many months since it's the company I am working for. Took this as challenge to create one and its much needed to prove my efforts. 10 years old company present in 18 places as of now Shadysbook (talk) 05:42, 21 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Oasis Fertility

The Wikimedia Foundation's Terms of Use require that editors disclose their "employer, client, and affiliation" with respect to any paid contribution; see WP:PAID. For advice about reviewing paid contributions, see WP:COIRESPONSE.

shadysbook (talk · contribs) has been paid by Oasis Fertility on their behalf. http://www.oasisindia.in/

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What is your connection to Oasis Fertility? --CNMall41 (talk) 05:18, 21 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I just created the page for the company Oasis Fertility which I am working for. I am working for more than 4 years here and no one is successful to create one page.

I took it as challenge since the company has good presence in the hospital market and more than decade year old institution.

Can you help us in getting this sorted? I really need this to make my effort worth Shadysbook (talk) 05:35, 21 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the disclosure. Please read WP:COI and WP:PAID and make the necessary disclosure where applicable prior to moving forward with any editing. --CNMall41 (talk) 05:41, 21 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, please make your disclosure on your user page User: Shadysbook which does not exist yet.

You should realize that notability needs to be established through independent, in-depth reporting about the company. While in the draft stage, you might as well omit all press releases, publicity efforts, interviews with company principals, and routine announcements. No amount of these will help get the draft accepted. On the other hand, if you can present a small handful of good independent reporting about the company, with significant coverage, the draft can be accepted and some of the other material to fill things out can be added via {{edit request}}s on the article talk page. — jmcgnh^{(talk) (contribs)} 05:55, 21 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

You should reply to me here rather than starting a new conversation on my talk page.

Your draft is not deleted or currently under threat of deletion. The instructions I gave earlier are what you need to do. If you can't find any references of the sort needed, you may have to be content to wait until better references appear. — jmcgnh^{(talk) (contribs)} 07:31, 21 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Not able to understand how to reply/respond to you. Please help me on this and added disclosure and links that helps to understnad company coverage over news, pr and media. Please check jmcgnh (talk)

Please check the disclosure and aother links helping the coverage of Oasis Fertility jmcgnh Shadysbook (talk) 08:44, 24 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Jmcgnh: I have added the disclosure at the user page, assuming Shadysbook didn't know how to do it. Jay 💬 11:13, 26 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Disclosure

The Wikimedia Foundation's Terms of Use require that editors disclose their "employer, client, and affiliation" with respect to any paid contribution; see WP:PAID. For advice about reviewing paid contributions, see WP:COIRESPONSE.

shadysbook (talk · contribs) has been paid by Oasis Fertility on their behalf. http://www.oasisindia.in/

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Disclosure for Oasis Fertility

The Wikimedia Foundation's Terms of Use require that editors disclose their "employer, client, and affiliation" with respect to any paid contribution; see WP:PAID. For advice about reviewing paid contributions, see WP:COIRESPONSE.

shadysbook (talk · contribs) has been paid by Oasis Fertility on their behalf. http://www.oasisindia.in/ and https://oasisindia.in/news-and-media/

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Oasis Fertility (February 27)

Your recent article submission has been rejected. If you have further questions, you can ask at the Articles for creation help desk or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help. The reason left by S0091 was: This topic is not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia. The comment the reviewer left was: No improvement since last decline and most of the sources are poor, some blatantly promotional while other are mostly what Oasis says about itself.

S0091 (talk) 18:10, 27 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Oasis Fertility

Hello, Shadysbook. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Oasis Fertility, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 19:01, 30 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Oasis Fertility

Hello, Shadysbook. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Oasis Fertility".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 18:13, 27 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]