User talk:ShaanFatima

Consequence Karma

You say you created this draft "to help a friend". Please make sure you declare your conflict of interest. Deb (talk) 19:23, 6 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Let me explain further. A user called User:Shaahedk created the article, but it was deleted as advertising. You created the article immediately afterwards, and the Plot summary has identical wording to that previous version. Are you the same person as Shaahedk, editing under another name? If not, how come you used the exact same wording? Deb (talk) 18:08, 8 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

User:Deb I have that wording because whenever I change something on Wikipedia, or any other place, I copy the text on my computer and then change it to get the correct grammar. I had that article with me and when I thought of making some changes in that one. You can check that I did some changes in that articles too before it got deleted. And when next day I tried opening it, I couldn't find it here and I thought of making it myself. I used the text I had as a basis of the article as I am new to this. Now please check the article itself and let me know if that article fits the Wikipedia standards. I will make necessary changes as advised as I am positive that it is way simpler than those of various other big budget films' articles like Badlapur Nakkash Rockstar Jolly LLB 2 Jabariya Jody and various others, as those are the basis of the changes I did in the article besides from the advise I got from the chat room. I would appreciate if you see the thing and let me know if there is still a problem. Because now I am starting to think that putting an article on wikipedia is a professional job and a common individual shouldn't do it. Help me out to make it clear to me. Thanks in advance for your help. ShaanFatima (talk) 06:27, 9 May 2021 (UTC).[reply]

You say "now I am starting to think that putting an article on wikipedia is a professional job and a common individual shouldn't do it". It's not a professional job for someone who speaks good English, but it's bound to be more difficult for someone like you, whose English is very limited, so you should think carefully about whether you are ready to create a brand-new article from scratch. I asked you a straight question above: Are you Shaahedk, using another name? You seem to be going out of your way to avoid answering. Until you do, I won't be giving you any assistance. Deb (talk) 07:51, 9 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

User:Deb YOUR QUESTION - Are you the same person as Shaahedk, editing under another name? MY ANSWER - NO. As you rightly pointed out that my English is limited, I just thought me saying that much, as much as I said in my last reply, was obvious answer. But as my English is limited so now I have realised that it was not obvious. Sorry for me making wrong assumption about that. ShaanFatima (talk) 12:26, 9 May 2021 (UTC).[reply]

Okay, thanks for that. I will take it that it's a coincidence that you both started editing at about the same time. Now, one of your mistakes was to copy text from an article that had already been marked as problematic. But then you made this edit, which added a reference, but also added grammatical errors. The phrase "on YouTube channel of Altitude 8848 Films" is bad English, as is "was attended by a some well known industry people". At the moment the draft article has been improved a bit, but there are still lots of really bad sentences, such as "But soon a lot of people deny to attend the pooja ceremony and Kusum finds out that her regular priest cannot come as he got Corona Positive." So I would advise you to start small. Deb (talk) 12:31, 9 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

User:Deb Thanks for a quick reply. I am trying some small edits also. But I would like to wait for the review of this one also. Now! I will try and improve this article as much as possible and I will especially make changes to all the sentences you pointed out. Thanks for the help. ShaanFatima (talk) 13:43, 9 May 2021 (UTC).[reply]

Hello User:Deb would you be kind enough to remove the COI note from the [1] Draft Article. As I suppose that might help in review process. Also just to inform you I am trying to improve it as much as possible. ShaanFatima (talk) 08:31, 23 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Consequence Karma has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Consequence Karma. Thanks! Deb (talk) 09:37, 23 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Consequence Karma (May 25)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Jupitus Smart was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of films). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

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Jupitus Smart 18:29, 25 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, ShaanFatima! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Jupitus Smart 18:29, 25 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Regarding your draft article Draft:Consequence Karma

https://copyvios.toolforge.org/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=Draft%3AConsequence+Karma&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=1&turnitin=0

This is the link of the copy vio detector. There is 20% copy detected from the sources. In Wikipedia we have to modify and write our own words, and should not copy from other websites. It can be copyrighted and can delete the article. Jogesh 69 (talk) 18:13, 27 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks Jogesh 69 for this tool. I have changed things and now it shows way lesser than what it was showing initially. I would appreciate if you check it once more and guide me more on this. Although! I am still confused, can't I put the facts about the film like names of the actors and characters, those would be same always and the Quotes from those particular articles. Please guide me on that too. Regards ShaanFatima (talk) 07:28, 29 May 2021 (UTC).[reply]

Yes User:ShaanFatima, you can use the name of the actors, just don't copy the whole paragraph like premise or plot or any other info. You can copy the credentials or every details. Jogesh 69 (talk) 09:13, 29 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

It is okay, I will also clear some. Now your task is to add as many references as you can. Jogesh 69 (talk) 09:15, 29 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks Jogesh 69 for the modifications you did. I have put some more references, but you please have a look at them and let me know if there is more needed. I suppose we cannot put the link of the film and trailer itself in it as the Trailer is on YouTube & Film is on MX Player (free for all)? ShaanFatima (talk) 14:54, 29 May 2021 (UTC).[reply]

Nope, we cannot put the link of the trailer video. Jogesh 69 (talk) 15:02, 29 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Consequence Karma

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 07:01, 14 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Consequence Karma

Hello, ShaanFatima. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Consequence Karma".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 06:34, 14 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]