User talk:Sgibbs44/Internet art

Things to work on for your Week 9 continued edits:

Evaluate an article: Go back to your article evaluation and pull out the list of things you said you could improve on the existing article. Put that list here and cross things off as you do them (you can also edit what I have said on this talk page and cross things off as you complete them).
Copyedits: Move those over to this sandbox and publish each with explicit notes on what you changed from the original Wikipedia article. That way when you migrate your work to live Wikipedia you will be able to publish and explain each change as you go. Doing so is a required part of the Week 13 Wikipedia assignment.
Bibliography: This is a good start for a bibliography, but you should starting summarizing this work and possibly finding more to build out your contributions to the existing Wikipedia article.
Citing sources: Again, start adding more to your sandbox, but make sure it is clear where in the live Wikipedia page your edits will go.
Adding media/hyperlinks: You did this for week 8, but you should also go through and see if there are more things that should be hyperlinks in whatever you add and the existing article. The image you added is fine, but be sure before you add media to the live Wikipedia article that it is actually necessary or contributes to the article (that is, you had to do it for this assignment, but in your final Wikipedia contributions don't add it just to add it).
Overall: You seem to be doing things week by week, but now you really need to focus on the bigger picture of what you plan to add/edit here. Is there more in the existing article that needs copyediting? More citations you can use to expand on the sections you are working on? The more planning you can do now the easier it will be for you to chip away at those edits between now and November 22 when you need to move your final edits to live Wikipedia.

Will add more to tools and themes later from Greene Found newer sources and added to the bib page, will incorporate later Adrishaw (talk) 13:51, 21 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Week 12 feedback: Content-wise this is looking really good. You need to fix some problems in your citations but otherwise this is good to start moving to live Wikipedia. Great work! Adrishaw (talk) 22:15, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]