User talk:Sefrench/sandbox

What I Changed

I added her birth place to the box in the upper right corner.

I changed her field in that box from psychologist to psychology.

I reworded the first sentence in the intro paragraph.

I added the second sentence to the intro paragraph.

I added the third sentence to the intro paragraph.

I created the 'Interests in Clinical Psychology' section because there was little about this and it was in the early life section, but she contributed to clinical psychology and I believe it deserves its own section.

I edited the last paragraph of early life and education and then made it the first paragraph in the interests in clinical psychology section.

I made a second paragraph in the interests in clinical psychology section that explained Hollingworth's contributions to clinical psychology.

Sefrench (talk) 17:14, 19 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good, Sarah. You should try publishing your changes on the Wikipedia to see what the reviewers say. Dperkins16 (talk) 19:46, 21 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I like your paragraph on her interests in clinical psychology, Sarah. I think that's a solid contribution to the article. Good work! Dperkins16 (talk) 16:24, 12 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]