User talk:Scott Rayner

Articles Needing Improvement

Culinary Art

• Article flagged for its factual accuracy being compromised due to out-of-date information
• Article needs additional citations for verifications
• Article flagged for lending undue weight to certain ideas, incidents, or controversies

Farce

• Article flagged as incomplete
• Article is in a list format that may be better presented using prose

Potential Articles to Edit

Combat flight simulation game

• Article's tone or style may not reflect the encyclopedic tone used on Wikipedia
• Article needs additional citations for verification
• The sections of the article need to be reworked and rearranged
• Redundant information can be removed

Binding Energy

• Needs additional citations for verification
• Article's tone needs work to appeal to a broader audience

Tasks for Editing Articles

Combat flight simulation game

• Task 1: Review the article's 'Talk' page
• Task 2: Comment my plans to edit on the article's 'Talk' page
• Task 3: Address the lead section of the article
  • The tone needs to be reworked to fit Wikipedia's standards
  • Its contents may need to be reworked as well
• Task 4: Rework each section to fix their tone and to remove redundant information
• Task 5: Rearrange the sections in a way that flows better with the content

Binding Energy

• Task 1: Review the article's 'Talk' page
• Task 2: Comment my plans to edit on the article's 'Talk' page
• Task 3: Address the tone of the entire article
  • Sounds like an essay
  • Doesn't convey its information clearly

Welcome!

Hello, Scott Rayner, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

I hope you enjoy editing here. If you haven't already done so, please check out the student training library, which introduces you to editing and Wikipedia's core principles. You may also want to check out the Teahouse, a community of Wikipedia editors dedicated to helping new users. Below are some resources to help you get started editing.

Handouts
Choosing an article to edit Editing an article • Add images to articles Citing sources on Wikipedia
Additional Resources
You can find answers to many student questions on our Q&A site, ask.wikiedu.org

If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:23, 16 March 2018 (UTC)