User talk:Sclark9110/sandbox
"There are guides volunteers with live with and work with that can speak both English and Spanish." Paragraph 1 Line 3.
"There are outreach missions where volunteers go to a local school, park, or church and play with the children. This can consist of singing with the children, playing games with the children, or making crafts with the children". "with the children" is too repetitive.
A break down of certain sections would be nice to know. Like "How to get there and how much it costs", "the activities you will do", "clothing", and others you might think of. Just to organize the page better so it is easier to find the information.Tomflock (talk) 18:54, 5 April 2012 (UTC)
I agree with Tom! A break down of sections would be good. Other than that, though, there was a lot of really good information!Eacoughlin (talk) 19:07, 5 April 2012 (UTC)