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Pre-FAC comments

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  • Review for MOS issues - you have some repeated wikilinks, seas of blue, easter eggs, etc
  • The article would benefit from a thorough copy-editing. I'd suggest reading the article out loud - that will help you to catch errors like "which was supported the lead single". Alternatively you could submit the article to GOCE
  • Make sure the article's tense makes sense for the information being presented. For example, "At age two, she began singing and has performed in front of a crowd": she certainly has, but I think you mean either she had begun performing or she began performing from that point. Nikkimaria (talk) 19:07, 28 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]