User talk:Sbenson13/sandbox/articledraft
First and foremost I would like to humbly congratulate you on the work you have done in this article. You have provided a great start for research on the Theater District in New York City, Manhattan. I would recommend going through and giving some links to the more popular articles Wikipedia has information on, a good reference in to what I am meaning is for things like “Broadway.” Your article is currently in wonderful condition and has provided core information most readers have to search across several websites to learn. The format of your article is looking like that of one on Wikipedia. Your hard work has certainly paid off and is shown in the writing of your work. I would also like to recommend going through and checking for small grammatic issues within your writing. I feel this article had successfully reflected the information you wanted to get across.
Peer Review // Jordan Carter: Your article on the New York Manhattan Theater District was great. The information you provided was very detailed and informal. You have definitely added more information that helps readers further understand the headings. I liked the way you broke down details in the Disney portion of the article. Your draft is very well explained and thought out. It is also in pretty good Wiki format. It is neutral and not opinionated. As always I’d recommend looking around to see if any more information is able to be added to your drafts, if possible. I liked how you have added multiple wiki-links to help readers further understand a topic. Other than making sure there are not little errors, such as grammar, and double checking to see if there is any more information that could be provided, your article draft is pretty much perfect and doesn’t need much improvement. Really good job, Sam!
Peer Review- This was a good article choice to work on. I like the information that you added about Disney's impact on the Manhattan Theater. I believe the information about Disney was a good thing to add because that name alone is eye catching and made me want to keep reading the article. You gave a whole lot of details in your sections as well. The sections don’t seem to be super long, they are very clear and straight to the point. Your draft is neutral and not favoring one side. Also, the order of your sections look great and the sources you used seem to work. Honestly, I am not sure you need to fix anything with your draft. Maybe just go through and check for any minor mistakes missed.
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