User talk:Sandyderulo
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[edit]Hello, Sandyderulo, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 02:08, 21 January 2016 (UTC)
Speedy deletion nomination of Denyse Benoît
[edit]Hello Sandyderulo,
I wanted to let you know that I just tagged Denyse Benoît for deletion, because it's too short to identify the subject of the article.
If you feel that the article shouldn't be deleted and want more time to work on it, you can contest this deletion, but please don't remove the speedy deletion tag from the top.
You can leave a note on my talk page if you have questions. ubiquity (talk) 22:38, 2 February 2016 (UTC)
Article draft
[edit]Please note that I moved your draft to User:Sandyderulo/Denyse Benoît where you can continue to work on it. Once complete it can be moved to article space.--Jezebel's Ponyobons mots 23:40, 2 February 2016 (UTC)
Peer Review
[edit]Hello,
I was assigned to peer review your wikipedia article. And I shall do so , to the best of my abilities. First off, it was a great article to read, lovely to learn on local filmmakers. You have credible sources and structure of the article is good. Somethings I would like to point out are the italics of movie titles, please make sure all the movie titles are in Italics. (please check Career section ). The Important Position section, since it is only one line I would suggest to somehow fit it in the career section rather than having another section dedicated to just one sentence. The reference links 1 &3 are the same, can you fit it back to one link rather than putting two links.
In 1986 she gave birth to her son and decided to concentrate her time on writing scripts and in 1991 she came back and wrote and directed a docudrama named Two Thieves (1991), which was about a Montreal sculptor and was presented on CBC Toronto - This sentence can be separated into two sentences as it sounds like a run on sentence. Separate it from in 1991...
Once again her film was selected in multiple festivals in Montreal and in France. At that time, French people did not know much about Quebec cinema and the film was an eye opening experience for them.
It is suggested to not say "Once again', it leaves that to be an aggressive tone a tad bit.
Denyse Benoit is a Canadian actress, director and screenwriter from Montreal in Quebec. I know you linked both Montreal and Quebec, it is preferable to put a comma rather the word in. Like what you did for Sainte Dorothee , Quebec.
Best of luck on finalizing your article,
Filmstudiesclass01Filmstudiesclass01 (talk) 18:40, 19 March 2016 (UTC)