User talk:Samin Champion
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[edit]Hello, Samin Champion, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:54, 13 January 2020 (UTC)
Notes
[edit]Hi! I have some notes:
- Avoid using phrases like "passion for", as it's commonly used in marketing material and comes across as promotional.
- Be careful of quotes, as they should be used sparingly and only when the content can't be summarized in your own words. In this case the quote doesn't really fit into the article and honestly comes across as a little non-neutral.
- Avoid hotlinking within the article - if it is meant to source the claim, it should be used as in-line citations. You also need more sourcing in the article that's independent of Stwyer and covers her in-depth.
Overall I think you've done well here - a lot of this will just be small tweaks and sourcing. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:24, 28 February 2020 (UTC)