User talk:Sabrina101380!/sandbox

Hi Sabrina101380!, here's some feedback about your sandbox.

Be careful to avoid references to relative time. Instead of saying "over the past 2 decades", which will be a changing time period depending on when the content is read, try instead "From 2000–2020..." or something like that. That way, the content will always stay accurate no matter how long it stays on the Wikipedia article.
Looks like you're missing punctuation in your first sentence
It looks like you're rewriting the lead for the article Sexual abuse and intellectual disability. This is probably a good idea, as the lead is a really important part of an article, and oftentimes the only part of an article someone will read. However, when adding novel content to the lead, it is really important that the content is also present in the rest of the article. The lead is supposed to be a summary of the rest of the article--therefore, it shouldn't have any novel content.

Other than that, I think this looks really good! You're frequently using citations to show where you're getting this material, and all your citations look like they are reliable sources. Nicely done! Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:28, 16 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]