User talk:SShuck/Stephan A. Schwartz

I'll be adding comments as I read through the entry. At present, the format of the bibliography is unacceptable. Please refer to other Wikipedia entries for models of appropriate bibliographic reference formats. Note that bibliographies always present entries in alphabetical order by author and date and must include full and correct bibliographic information for each entry in a consistent form. Hoopes (talk) 00:37, 26 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Your entry has insufficient hyperlinks to other relevant Wikipedia entries. Please note how I've added several of these. These help to connect your contribution to others. The failure to include a hyperlink to the entry on psychic archaeology in the first paragraph was an especially egregious oversight, but there are other hyperlinks missing throughout. Hoopes (talk) 00:43, 26 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

For example, you write, "Previous submarine expeditions discovered a depth at which there is no extreme low magnetic frequency." What is a low magnetic frequency? Can you provide hyperlinks that would help a reader to find this information? Hoopes (talk) 00:49, 26 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]