User talk:S0293673/sandbox

Hi S0293673

  Overall your sandbox looks very organized and easy to understand each section. I really like the new section you added in about language along with the percentages. I also liked how you inputed links making it easier to navigate to the pages where the information is located. Overall the information looks good and the amount of detail is a plus ! (AlyssaMDejesus) (talk) April 11,2016

Hi S0293673,

I think the statistics in the population section need more transitions. For the work section, I would separate statistics about education, health and social assistance. Also you don't have to put this but I am curious what are the ages of people working retail? Also why did immigrants stop becoming citizens in the 90's? I think that would be great to know info. Transportation section/overall vaguely sparse so you could use some more sources but you have great info on the sections you do have. Keep up the good work! From: sariah.sugarman — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sariah.sugarman (talk • contribs) 20:51, 11 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Good job. I would get rid of the home part and start cleaning up your sandbox. I would combine some sections and expand more -Dr. Chenault Tiffygc1 (talk) 19:52, 15 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]