User talk:Russell miles

Welcome!

Hello, Russell miles, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions, especially your edits to Hyena Road. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are a few links to pages you might find helpful:

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Hyena Road

Hi Russell. I've reverted your additions to Hyena Road for several reasons. The first is that WP:FILMPLOT outlines the expectations for film plot sections, including the format and length of such sections. The content you added was far too long.

In addition, it reads very much like a personal review rather than a summation of the plot. You used first-person, such as "I imagine that...". There are several spelling mistakes and grammar issues. Towards the end it begins to talk about other films, the filming process, commentary on the actors and process, etc. These all need to be backed by what Wikipedia calls reliable sources.

Please review some of the links above in the welcome template I added.

Thanks. -- ferret (talk) 12:42, 1 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi. I see you've chosen to ignore this and other advise. Please DO NOT re-ad the plot and details you keep adding to the article. It is not how a plot should be written, especially with all your personal opinions on the film. If you continue to do so, then it will be viewed as disruption and you will face being blocked from editing. Please reply here to indicate you understand this. Thanks. Lugnuts ^{Precious bodily fluids} 12:56, 1 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

For the critique section, please read WP:OR - you're adding in tons of opinions with no basis for them (IE they're missing sources). Please take a look at WP:MOSFILM before making any further edits. If you have any questions, please raise them here. Thanks. Lugnuts ^{Precious bodily fluids} 14:05, 1 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

November 2016

Please do not add or change content, as you did at Hyena Road, without citing a reliable source. Please review the guidelines at Wikipedia:Citing sources and take this opportunity to add references to the article. Thank you. -- ferret (talk) 12:55, 1 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]